Looks like you are on your way again, with a few tweaks.After my first brew I have learned that patience is definitely required and everything is to be handled carefully as I had a LOT of yeast in my bottles of YAIPA.
Now, I've just put my second brew on and I'm determined not to have the same problems this time round.
After going in to my local HBS and tasting various brews, I decided on:-http://www.lovebrewing.co.uk/sierra/
There are no forum reviews of the Lovebrewing kit you are doing as far I can see. Why not start one in the forum kit review section......
http://www.thehomebrewforum.co.uk/forumdisplay.php?f=37
You could start with telling us what you have decided to do and how it all looks as you progress. Others will be interested especially as this range of kits is currently on offer and free delivery is much better than other online places (free on orders over �ã46). And, of course, you can still ask questions in the new thread :thumb: